I like the art, and the writing is pretty good, but the game itself is really tiny and doesn’t really allow for character development or realistic relationships.
Also, there are a number of bugs involving images and a few choices.
WARNING: SPOILERS
The premise of having the protagonist... etc. is hard to pull off without revealing it to the player, but I feel like you did a decent job. I think it could’ve been a bit better if you had given a couple subtle clues, perhaps in the form of commentary from the protagonist, that would make sense in a normal context as well as a darker one.
To return to what I said earlier about the size of the game, I get that this is not designed to be a dating game, and so development of the ‘romance’ options isn’t a priority, but I think developing the protagonist as a character and giving some insight into his psyche beyond the generic ‘crazy serial killer’ attitude would really add to the game.
Finally I just wanna say, despite all my criticism, this is quite good for a first game, and I hope you guys do more.