Sword of the Elements Hack 1.1.5 + Redeem Codes

The beginning is so boring I can barley get through it hope the rest of the story is better

I can see that much time and effort is put into this but the writing is long-winded and the pace is slow. 1 dimensional character development and a lot of fighting, walking and talking. Also, all the stats should be displayed in one page to reduce number of clicks to get to the specific stat.

Fixed most of the grammar issues, there are still a few but it's readable now

I'd like to start off by saying that I genuinely enjoyed this game and felt it was worth the time and money I spent on it. The plot and concept is very interesting and I got hooked right away.

That being said, this doesn't feel like a polished work; it doesn't feel finished. There are a TON of grammatical and spelling errors (sometimes to the point of being unreadable but mostly just distracting). Relationships with individual characters are shallow at best, especially the family of your character.

The most damning thing of all, though, was the fact that one of the characters either dies or isn't brought up throughout the rest of the game (depending on your choices). Yes, this could be a setup for a sequel, but more than anything it's really annoying considering how shallow your character's relationships with the other characters are. Not only that, but it makes it glaringly obvious how unnecessary the character is in the entire game (you could just have an already existing character do the few plot relevant things they do with no difference whatsoever).

If I'm honest, I probably want to like this game more than I actually do. The issue is that it reads more like a (very, very) rough first draft rather than a complete story. It needs cleaning up: fix the grammar and spelling, add more meaningful character interactions, and make sure what's being written is actually relevant to the story (sometimes it felt a bit scattered). If those things were to happen I'm sure this would be a 5 star game:)

The world depth was excellent and the story length was very good. That said the story could have been more understandable had the author used a English fluent editor. If the game had better English it would have been rated a 4.5 to 5 but at its current rating it is still a good game
And expect much from this author in the future

The game appears to have a complex role playing system to it. That's the only good thing as the author's use of English isn't very good. The story and characters would have gone a long way with some editing, and I can't help but wonder why Choice of Games gave this one a go.

It is rather heartbreaking considering the time and effort that was put into making this game and I commend the author for such hard work. That can only get you so far though as the game becomes unintentionally hilarious with poor grammar and sentence structure.

Perhaps with some editing I can recommend the game, but until then you might wanna pass.

I am a huge fan of Choice of Games, and even more of a fan of the games put on Hosted Games. I looked at the reviews before buying this, thinking that I could get past a few grammar mistakes, a few misspellings... I was wrong, for I couldn't get past the fourth page. The story seems fine, but it's too much of a pain to have to sit and think on what every sentence really is saying. I'm really hoping for an updated version so that I can enjoy what the author has created.

Pros: very long, good storyline.

Cons: choices only effect stats, and only effect storyline marginally, grammar issues, but you get use to them, and predictability.

Overall it's a good game, if the author could just fix the grammar issues and possibly make the choices have more away in the storyline then this would be possibly THE best choice of games books!

Note to author; Please finish the series, I loved it and would love to see the 2nd 3rd and 4th parts!

- a hopeful reader.

I liked the story very much it seems well thought out. The down side is the grammar but personally this doesn't bother me all that much.

If I could complain and have this app removed I would. I know the small child who tried to translate this writing into English was probably starved and whipped often but even still he could have done a better job...
Spelling-F
Grammar (use of actual words)-F
Sentence structure-F
Choices-D
Endings- to painful and trying to even continue to the end.
Seems like there is a lot of content here but why would anyone put this up in its current state?
I AM embarrassed and humiliated for this writer and buying this game. I am taking this app off my phone for fear of being seen with it. Horrible just horrible.
I don't even count this as a choice game.